The intro/breakdown was a bit boring but the drop was phenomenal! Really love those vocal chops and chord progression, keep up the good work!
Thanks man, appreciate it! :D
Nice little track. I don't know if I would consider the chord progression "happy", I would definitely consider it upbeat but maybe more of a "love" type of chord progression. At least that was the first feeling I had when I first heard it. Regardless of what emotion it pulls from me it sounds good and I would like to see if you finish this out.
I'd agree! Thanks for checking it out :D
I really liked everything up until about the 3:00 mark, right around there your percussion's drop in and are out of sync with everything else in the song. The hi-hats are fine it's some of those other samples that sound off-beat. The rest of the song including the slow down at the end are perfect, good job on your final submission!
Weird, I know what you're talking, but I can't hear it in a way where it bothers me. I used swing on all the drums except kick and the ride. The part which you're talking about is the part where the toms first come in which also have swing in them, so I'm probably just going to take them off of the swing channel.
The end I'll probably change though, it feels lazy to me.
nice submission! this track feels very hypnotic, there is enough variation though to keep it interesting the whole way through. The only constructive criticism I would give would be to definitely work on your mastering or have someone else do it for you, other than that great track! :3
Neat combination. The style reminds me of something I might hear in a SNES game, keep up the good work :3
Thanks! I thought the combination would be cool; I'm glad you like it.
loving all of those vocal synths :3
awesome melody and progression of the song, I stayed interested the entire way through. I know you're going to the next round, lol
hopefully I see you there<3
Thanks so much for stopping by! Glad you enjoyed the vocal fx, was fun working on those. I hope to see you on the next round! (I'm a judge, by the way, not a contestant haha. Looking forward to hearing your future work!)
Your chord progressions are awesome! The only constructive criticism I could give would be to work on leads. So badly I wanted to hear a lead come ripping through that melody and just capture me, but literally everything else in this track was on point. Great work! :3
thank you! il definantly work on my leads, thnx for the tip.
Amazing composition sir, the progression of the track kept me interested the whole way through. I definitely think you captured "a journey to find something within"
Thank you very much, kind sir! I am glad that you enjoyed it!
The intro wasn't bad but it wasn't great. I think it would have been better if you started at 0:25, that beginning section feels too out of place. The drop at 1:00 was great, that rewind effect is really hot! Overall a good song 4/5
Can't wait to hear the finished product. Definitely a solid WIP :3
It's actually finished, I just haven't had time to upload it/ /:
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